Storyboard
- We see a long shot of Ranga's Meat Shop in the Jungle
- we go into the meat shop where we see a wall filled with pictures of generations of TIGER butchers that have owned this shop and we see a picture of the current ownder
- A LARGE TIGER is cutting meat with a big chopping knife, his back is turned to A YOUNGER VERSION OF HIM, HIS SON
- we see THE SON looking back to see if his dad is looking and then he goes back to what he was doing
- we see the boy making a small sculpture out of clay
-
- THE FATHER TIGER TURNS TO HIS SON
--(THIS IS A NEW SHOT) THE SON quickly puts his sculpture away
- THE FATHER APPROACHES THE SON WITH A LEG OF ZEBRA and lays it on the table in front of the boy
- HE HANDS the knife over to the boy
- THE BOY FROWNS -- POUTS AND SIGHS
- A DREAM APPEARS ABOVE HIS HEAD (we see his dream in 2d/3d cell shaded above his head) he is showing his dad his sculpture, his dad gets mad and cuts his dream in half. The dream vanishes)
- the boy gulps
-THE BOY LOOKS AT THE ZEBRA MEAT IN FRONT OF HIM
- he moves his hand up in preparation to cut, the knife flies out of his hand and gets stuck on the wall behind him BARELY MISSING HIS FATHER
- FATHER PULLS KNIFE OUT OF WALL AND TAKES A DEMONSTRATIVE WHACK AT THE MEAT-
-FATHER HANDS KNIFE OVER.
-SON CUTS- (we don't see what he's doing)
- CLOSE-UP OF FATHER'S FACE
-CLOSE-UP OF ZEBRA MEAT WITH SMILEY FACE CUT INTO IT
-SON BACKS UP --AFRAID AND OPENS FRIDGE
CLOSE UP PAN OF FRIDGE SHELF WITH ROWS OF CLAY BUSTS
- INTERCUT CLOSE UP DAD'S FACE----
he looks even more angry and starts throwing all the little sculptures out
- boy still squeamish as dad keeps throwing the sculptures out
- he stops his dad and shows him the big sculpture he made of his dad behind the little sculptures
- close up of boy's face as he waits to see what his father's reaction, he has a big smile on his face
- cut to dad's face -- his anger turns to puzzlement
- we see a little cloud appears above the dads head, (we see a younger version of him,
pouty, we see the hands of his father handing him a knife. he looks at the picture on the table next to him of a tiger in the circus, then looks at the meat in front of him and sighs) his dreams dissappears
- the dad smiles and pats his son on the head
- he picks up the meat sculpture
- scene fades
- mid Shot of Ranga's meat shop -- in the window we see the dad's sculpture along with al the other little meat sculptures. There's a sign in the window that says "BEST MEAT SCULPTURES IN ALL THE LAND"
-- the end
Saturday, November 15, 2008
New Story with better ending
- We see a long shot of Ranga's Meat Shop in the Jungle
- we go into the meat shop where we see a wall filled with pictures of generations of TIGER butchers that have owned this shop and we see a picture of the current ownder
- A LARGE TIGER is cutting meat with a big chopping knife, his back is turned to A YOUNGER VERSION OF HIM, HIS SON
- we see THE SON looking back to see if his dad is looking and then he goes back to what he was doing
- we see the boy making a small sculpture out of clay
-
- THE FATHER TIGER TURNS TO HIS SON
--(THIS IS A NEW SHOT) THE SON quickly puts his sculpture away
- THE FATHER APPROACHES THE SON WITH A LEG OF ZEBRA and lays it on the table in front of the boy
- HE HANDS the knife over to the boy
- THE BOY FROWNS -- POUTS AND SIGHS
- A DREAM APPEARS ABOVE HIS HEAD (we see his dream in 2d/3d cell shaded above his head) he is showing his dad his sculpture, his dad gets mad and cuts his dream in half. The dream vanishes)
- the boy gulps
-THE BOY LOOKS AT THE ZEBRA MEAT IN FRONT OF HIM
- he moves his hand up in preparation to cut, the knife flies out of his hand and gets stuck on the wall behind him BARELY MISSING HIS FATHER
- FATHER PULLS KNIFE OUT OF WALL AND TAKES A DEMONSTRATIVE WHACK AT THE MEAT-
-FATHER HANDS KNIFE OVER.
-SON CUTS- (we don't see what he's doing)
- CLOSE-UP OF FATHER'S FACE
-CLOSE-UP OF CARCASS WITH A CUT IN SMILEY FACE
-SON BACKS UP --AFRAID AND OPENS FRIDGE
CLOSE UP PAN OF FRIDGE SHELF WITH ROWS OF CLAY BUSTS WITH DAD'S BUST AS LARGEST ONE.
- INTERCUT CLOSE UP DAD'S FACE----
he looks even more angry and starts throwing all the little sculptures out
- boy still squeamish, looks around and sees a price tag on the table
- he picks up the price tag and sticks it into the large meat sculpture of his dad
- close up of boy's face as he waits to see what his father's reaction
- cut to dad's face -- his anger turns to puzzlement and then a smile
- dad pats his son on his head and picks up the meat sculpture
- scene fades
- mid Shot of Ranga's meat shop -- in the window we see the dad's sculpture along with al the other little meat sculptures. There's a sign in the window that says "BEST MEAT SCULPTURES IN ALL THE LAND"
-- the end
- we go into the meat shop where we see a wall filled with pictures of generations of TIGER butchers that have owned this shop and we see a picture of the current ownder
- A LARGE TIGER is cutting meat with a big chopping knife, his back is turned to A YOUNGER VERSION OF HIM, HIS SON
- we see THE SON looking back to see if his dad is looking and then he goes back to what he was doing
- we see the boy making a small sculpture out of clay
-
- THE FATHER TIGER TURNS TO HIS SON
--(THIS IS A NEW SHOT) THE SON quickly puts his sculpture away
- THE FATHER APPROACHES THE SON WITH A LEG OF ZEBRA and lays it on the table in front of the boy
- HE HANDS the knife over to the boy
- THE BOY FROWNS -- POUTS AND SIGHS
- A DREAM APPEARS ABOVE HIS HEAD (we see his dream in 2d/3d cell shaded above his head) he is showing his dad his sculpture, his dad gets mad and cuts his dream in half. The dream vanishes)
- the boy gulps
-THE BOY LOOKS AT THE ZEBRA MEAT IN FRONT OF HIM
- he moves his hand up in preparation to cut, the knife flies out of his hand and gets stuck on the wall behind him BARELY MISSING HIS FATHER
- FATHER PULLS KNIFE OUT OF WALL AND TAKES A DEMONSTRATIVE WHACK AT THE MEAT-
-FATHER HANDS KNIFE OVER.
-SON CUTS- (we don't see what he's doing)
- CLOSE-UP OF FATHER'S FACE
-CLOSE-UP OF CARCASS WITH A CUT IN SMILEY FACE
-SON BACKS UP --AFRAID AND OPENS FRIDGE
CLOSE UP PAN OF FRIDGE SHELF WITH ROWS OF CLAY BUSTS WITH DAD'S BUST AS LARGEST ONE.
- INTERCUT CLOSE UP DAD'S FACE----
he looks even more angry and starts throwing all the little sculptures out
- boy still squeamish, looks around and sees a price tag on the table
- he picks up the price tag and sticks it into the large meat sculpture of his dad
- close up of boy's face as he waits to see what his father's reaction
- cut to dad's face -- his anger turns to puzzlement and then a smile
- dad pats his son on his head and picks up the meat sculpture
- scene fades
- mid Shot of Ranga's meat shop -- in the window we see the dad's sculpture along with al the other little meat sculptures. There's a sign in the window that says "BEST MEAT SCULPTURES IN ALL THE LAND"
-- the end
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